Weekend (tanka)

Anticipating
Long green miles from the city
Escape was well planned
We even left home early
But alas: road construction.

2 thoughts on “Weekend (tanka)”

Jonathan Caswell

GOOD JOB WITH THE WITTY LAST LINE 😀

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May 1, 2015 at 1:42 am Reply
1. Rosetti C
  
  Thanks,Jonathan!
  
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  May 5, 2015 at 11:08 am Reply